maybe it's more interesting to shoot an image like that in the fields or something like that, now it's more like a snapshot in the street where you live.
Most of the houses are black and lack any detail, similarly the sky is a very uniform blue. I don't really see how it meets the challenge either - sorry
IMHO this does not depict my thoughts on death. I do like the colour in the sky but also feel the foreground could do with darking to make more of a silhouette effect