I think the focus hurts you a bit here, but you've probably already received that comment. The idea is great. A bit less centering of the subject would also be an improvement, for my taste at least.
The idea is really good in my opinion. However, with the picture being out of focus, with the egg placed right in the middle of the image (too static) and with the distracting details around the egg the image is too flawed in terms of technical execution.
This seems like a great starting point for a strong entry. But the location you've found this in doesn't really help it much and the light is very harsh. Compositionally you could perhaps get in closer and maybe have the subject not quite so bang in the center of the frame. Focus seems a bit soft too.