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I think you could have worked up the composition of this more effectively - the feather is just lying across the frame with no apparent consideration of the overall impact. Given the line/lines shape of the feather, I think you might have used that to make a strong element in frame - say, for example, a strong diagonal, and finding other elements to balance it and fill in the corners. This is a difficult kind of thing to learn though, as the 'standard rules' only apply in such obvious ways. |