I like the fact that you're using black and white as well as silhouetting the subject. The exposure is just right for a shot like this one.
I guess the angle the camera is tilted at is something I'm curious about. Why is it tilted that way, is there a reason for it or is it simply that way "just because"?
I know the window is giving the best light for a silhouette, but the building in the background seems a bit distracting since it's clearly visible and fairly well exposed. I think that closing the window would help obscure the building and keep the attention on the subject rather than what's behind him. Either that or using a smaller f/stop (larger aperture) to create a shallow depth of field which would in turn blur pretty much anything outside the window.
I hope this helps,
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