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12/05/2006 11:58:09 PMPost actions
i appreciate your daringness to attempt to add the arrow to the shot. i so wish it was straighter on.
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12/05/2006 09:28:32 PMPost actions
nice eyes. too bad about the strings on the arrow + basic editing. Still very likeable.
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12/05/2006 05:00:23 PMPost actions
Eh, could have been funny, the dof is good but the strings are distracting and take away from this picture
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12/05/2006 01:38:07 PMPost actions
This is cute. The photo is well exposed and the clarity/focus is good. A little overzealous with the noise reduction (plastic looking skin). Did you forget this was a basic challenge and couldn't reshoot without the strings holding the arrow in place? Best of luck to you in the challenge.
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12/05/2006 01:22:11 PMPost actions
Good idea. Too bad the strings are showing.
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12/04/2006 03:43:10 PMPost actions
Looks like Neat Image or Noise Ninja was a tad too strong resulting in plastic skin
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12/04/2006 11:57:33 AMPost actions
had it not been for the string then maybe a 10
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12/03/2006 03:07:36 PMPost actions
Great expression--looks like you already shot it! Little more DOF might have helped
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12/02/2006 06:53:31 PMPost actions
If the strings holding the arrow were not visible I would have voted 10. 9 for the strings, but great photo.
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12/02/2006 12:40:48 PMPost actions
The strings holding up the arrow really hurt this. I love the expression.
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12/01/2006 04:59:27 PMPost actions
hahahahahah great model expression!!!!!!!!!! 10
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12/01/2006 04:25:46 PMPost actions
good concept but i can clearly see the fishing line or thread and the face is over processed
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12/01/2006 04:15:18 PMPost actions
Bonus point for the great expression on your model!
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12/01/2006 10:03:13 AMPost actions
I think the string/nylon around the arrow spoils it. Lovely face.6
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12/01/2006 07:10:19 AMPost actions
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11/30/2006 08:24:30 PMPost actions
If only the strings weren't visible! Love the expression, great shot.
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11/30/2006 07:43:00 PMPost actions
Ha ha, great shot.... but you can see the string still tied to the arrow?
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11/30/2006 06:13:12 PMPost actions
The string is a little distracting, perhaps some modeling clay or putty could be used to hold the apple. Great overall impact.
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11/30/2006 09:30:44 AMPost actions
Terrific expression, but the string is a killer.
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11/29/2006 11:59:57 PMPost actions
Great expression - too bad about the strings on the arrow...
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11/29/2006 10:30:23 PMPost actions
I really like this.... but i can see the strings!!! Still an awesome picture
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11/29/2006 10:17:05 PMPost actions
is that selective editing? if not, GREAT PIC
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11/29/2006 09:37:47 PMPost actions
This is a clear arrow away from a perfect 10.
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11/29/2006 08:39:21 PMPost actions
I absolutely love the soft focus and expression on kid's face. The dart is distracting, especially with the fishing line.
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11/29/2006 08:35:36 PMPost actions
Creative, i think 3 other people had the same idea, yours was pulled off the best
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11/29/2006 06:49:37 PMPost actions
Great expression! Too bad about the wires on the arrow, but with basic editing what can you do? Well done--7
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11/29/2006 05:27:46 PMPost actions
This is GREAT ! I love the expression. And the perspective on the arrow. Shame the wires are not invisible. Couple of very minor niggles - the white hairs on the robe are distracting, and the chink of background bottom right keeps pulling my eye away from the scene.
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11/29/2006 05:24:26 PMPost actions
Some things could have been better... the sting could have been edited out and the hair on the sweater.
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11/29/2006 04:21:53 PMPost actions
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11/29/2006 01:59:23 PMPost actions
way too much Neat Image or Noise Ninja. Good expression, visible strings are distracting.
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11/29/2006 01:12:31 PMPost actions
The subject's eyes are striking, but the skin (especially around the mouth and nose) seems devoid of detail and very plastic, which I thought was a shame because it lost a lot of the impact of the photo for me.
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11/29/2006 12:04:09 PMPost actions
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11/29/2006 09:53:04 AMPost actions
Cute idea and expression... but I probably would have left the arrow out of it completely. For one thing, we can see that the arrow hit the apple successfully, so these wouldn't be "last words." And the string holding up the arrow is very visible :)
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11/29/2006 09:17:28 AMPost actions
too much neat image ... details in teh skin are lost
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11/29/2006 09:15:33 AMPost actions
If only you had the opportunity to remove the threads.
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11/29/2006 07:20:58 AMPost actions
Would have been better without the blurry arrow and string. Eyes are great.
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11/29/2006 03:00:29 AMPost actions
Nice DOF. Funny expression. Cool textures.
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11/29/2006 02:36:33 AMPost actions
too bad this was basic editing - maybe you could have had a person hold the fletchings off camera and ... but great facial expssion and idea.
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11/29/2006 02:12:16 AMPost actions
hmm, you overprocessed the face, but left the string visible...okay...I don't get it.
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11/29/2006 01:08:20 AMPost actions
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11/29/2006 12:55:25 AMPost actions
Great concept, great shot, but wayyyyy too much noise reduction.
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11/29/2006 12:40:05 AMPost actions
It's too bad we can see the string. Also, with this title I think it would've been better to not have the arrow there at all. The picture is very crisp. Good job!
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11/29/2006 12:36:48 AMPost actions
That face! Priceless! Great Set-Up & Portrait! Even the lines that hold the arrow add to the whimsy! Great Job! :)
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