unfortunately this just doesn't convey the feeling of being alone or lonliness to me, also the flash is very distracting, looks to be a hasily put together shot just to have something entered in the challenge...with more preparation the effect of you reflected in the mirror could become a very interesting photo
Love how neat your room is. Can't make up my mind if I would have liked it better cropped to just the mirror. The way it is kind of tilts the photo to one side. But then the mess on the other side could have justed added to the mess in the bottom of the mirror. 6 for now.
Focus is good, lighting works well. Its an interesting set up in general but I think the image in the mirror looks too busy. Also the subject loses impact because of the flash and general composition - looks a little thrown together. I really like the idea though, and think in a different circumstance using that method would work very well (without a big flash light) ;) 5
I'm sorry to say this - and I'd like to give some constructive criticism about the poor framing, messy foreground, underexposure etc - but at the end of the day this is simply a terrible photo. However, I didn't even manage to submit anything at all so take my judgement with a touch of hypocrasy if you like.
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