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I like this approach, but don't think it was executed very well here. (Sorry to be critical.) The model appears to be looking up at the top of the window like he sees something there, which detracts from the feeling of introspection. Compositionally, I think the model would be better placed further right rather than in the center. Technically, the background needs a bit more contrast, which is difficult since the inside is so dark in comparison but a little tweaking with curves might help. |