I like horse pictures, especially close-ups. One thing which is absolutely neccessary though is to manage the dof to make sure the main features are sharp. You have tried to put the viewers attention on the eye, but then left half the image on the right as a blank out of focus area. This part either needs cropping out or need to be pin sharp.
I would probably opt for cropping, moving the eye to the right 1/3 line and giving the viewer a little more space to the left of the hair. |