This is a great sharp photo. Nice work on the eyes....you must have seen Cindi tutorial "pimp those eyes"..j/k. Nice use of your lighting also. My only nitpick would be in post processing. Your model might be happy if you cloned out the small zit in the middle of her forehead.
Looks great, Mick. I see a lot better control of light here and some nice separation from the background. Only nit would be to have her turn slightly more toward the main light. Nice job!