Great idea. Lovely slant, curve, and color to the eye. Seems to be what light on white is all about. I agree with some of the comments that the skin tone is not the best. And I think it might work better if the top were cropped to just above the eyebrow, eliminating the dark line of hair.
The tones in the skin are unappealing to me. The dark wisp of hair at the edge of the face is a distraction...a slightly different angle could have eliminated that and also might have provided a more interesting curve to the side of the face.