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12/06/2006 08:14:44 PMPost actions
I think is too pink, I think it would help to pull the color out more. Just an idea but what if it were bw and color added to the broken heart. That may take the eye off the oof on the right and help guide your eye, but maybe not too. But this was a good idea.
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12/05/2006 10:35:47 PMPost actions
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12/05/2006 04:58:12 AMPost actions
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12/05/2006 12:31:19 AMPost actions
Fun, but more focus would be better, IMO of course.
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12/04/2006 12:49:48 PMPost actions
love the pastel colours in this. Background well-suited to composition
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12/03/2006 11:07:24 AMPost actions
This just doesn't do it for me. Nothing powerful or compelling & as the title is a bit cliché it makes me feel like the idea is too. I'm pretty much a newbie here, though, so take my comments with a grain of salt - just 'cause I'm being critical doesn't mean I think MY stuff is doing any better! You likely will do better than my submission... Good luck!
**Came back to adjust my comment & bump you up an extra point**
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12/02/2006 12:05:58 PMPost actions
focus your subject before shooting
12/01/2006 08:52:11 PMPost actions
The idea is good, smaller aperture would have made the foreground better focused, but would that have drawn attention away from the "point" of the pic?
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12/01/2006 07:29:15 PMPost actions
Cute idea, but not enough definition.
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11/29/2006 07:25:45 PMPost actions
Too much of this image is out of focus, for my taste.
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11/29/2006 06:46:15 PMPost actions
Neat idea, although my eyes are too quickly directed towards the broken love, and I'm left wondering what led to it, other than "not telling".
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11/29/2006 06:30:59 PMPost actions
I think I would prefer this shot with a larger DOF.
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11/29/2006 01:23:03 AMPost actions
hmm, I don't think entering 2 challenges with the same subject matter is very creative, but I suppose it isn't controversial until the the 3rd when the light on white scores come in. So I won't vote down for it.
PS, needs more color and contrast IMO
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11/29/2006 01:00:16 AMPost actions
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