good shot, I think it would look much better if the focus wasn't all on her face and the rest wasn't blown out. a little bit too much empty seeming space.
Leroy? Quite beautiful, very soft, gentle, and yet her face looks quite earthy in a way. Love the toning. The earring/choker work wonders here. I wish the right breast (the one in back) didn't get lost quite as much into the background, makes it look abnormally small and thin compared to the rest of her. She's beautiful. ~9
Bravo with taking a risk and photographing a model who doesn't meet the traditional physique type. She is lovely and the photo has just the right amount of softness and great composition.
A beautiful woman, there's no doubt. I love the effect the post work plays on her face and hair. Wonderfully soft but crisp at the same time. Great job on that. The issue that lets this image down though, as I see it, is the severity of the clipping around her right breast. It appears as though suspended in mid air as the texture and form of her torso has completely disappeared. I can't seem to get past that once my attention is drawn to it. :(
Beautiful soft photo. The texture of her skin and her hair make a nice contrast. I just wish there was a little more detail to define the shape of the torso under the right breast. It has kind of a strange floating away feeling to me- maybe a line would help, similar to the one defining the lengh of the arm. Aside from that, the composition and crop is nicely balanced.
Why? Of all the subjects available. Anyway... The photo is fine for the challenge in technical terms, although I think the subject matter (lady) takes too much space in your composition. Lighting seems to be a little too harsh and it makes her far breast look funny (smaller and almost disconnected or floating in air). Good luck in the challenge.
this is a beautiful shot .... i love the way its dark in that upper right hand corner and fades out into the page .... i find her expression interesting yet confusing, because i cant work out whether she's smiling, thoughtful, pensive, or looking at something in particular ... which is a good thing ... a bit mona lisa-ish! .. i reckon this could score really well ... good luck =9
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