Nice candid, but at least to my eyes the processing is just too much here. There is simply way too much to look at this way, and nothing stands out, everything is that bright middle. It's probably a matter of taste. ~5
Oh boy this is going to make the photo-fundementalists have a heart attack ;-)
I like this post processing, it takes the image to another level, but I'm sure you are walking a very thin line with the voters. Good luck, I hope it works out well.
Compositionally, I would have liked to see just a little more space to the left and right of the two guys, just giving them some extra space.