Very nice however I also have an issue with the border and i'm wondering if this would be better without the soap all over the model. For a nude, 6.2 in a non0nude challenge, not bad. Should have done better though I think.
Great result. I'd imagine this isn't easy to light. The border is a bit of a mix bag for me. I like it at the bottom where there is uniformity leaving the frame but at the top it feels too busy.
Likes: Good definition on the central back. I like the way the towel blends with the background, tying the model and background together. The eye is a prominent point of focus.
Dislikes: the pose feels contrived and forced, while the shadows of the arm across the back detract from the natural form of shadow there. The cleavage competes with the eye for attention. The highlights on the shoulders and between the arm and body detract from the overall form of the body.
Great pose and lighting, and beautiful model. The soap and her freckles add a great texture. The frame is the only thing that bothers me, it's too distracting.
Although this is top notch technically, I can't help feeling the composition is not quite right. Too much dead space to the right, not enough to the left. 7.
not a bad idea. sorry I think that the pink frame is terrible... and distracting from the model's body. too white on the top of the model (on the skin) why? in advanced editing you can clear the moles whit the clone. 6
Well, I'm sure you're racking up the views. The thing holding this back IMO is the "white" isn't white, it looks yellow or beige. Good luck in the challenge.
I need to get this one out of the way so I can stop looking at it. Of course, beautiful model and interesting lighting. I like your border treatment - hightens the sense of voyuerism. The balance of the composition is very successful. Good photo.8
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