Challenge:All Alone (Classic Editing) Camera:Toshiba PDR-3300 Location: new jersey Date: Oct 20, 2003 Aperture: 3.1 ISO: 283 Shutter: 1/45 Date Uploaded: Oct 20, 2003
Composition is good - I like that the main subject isn't directly in the center. Quite a few computers, makes for a little bit busy image. Lighting is okay and the photo fits the challenge in general, but the soft focus over the whole image really detracts for me, the interest factor is missing for me. 4
Unfortunately, this looks more like a poorly focused snapshot than anything. If you took an extreme closeup of your subject in sharp focus with a low f/number to decrease your depth of field you could turn this into a good image. Strong side lighting would help to.
Picture Idea - Good, Composition - Good, BUT... Too blurred as the focal points are the black chairs which ruins the shot somewhat. Still its good and theres room for improvement - 7