Hey David - nice shot! It looks a bit like a face towering over the viewer. I gave this one a better score than what you got overall, and was happy to see this is yours now when reviewing the challenge entries. I think you've come such a long way! Nice job with this one.
4 - Like the perspective. Variation in composition and framing, perhaps going for wider or even more of a square framing, likely enhance this subject/'use' the square lights more, and make it even better in my opinion.