Aw crap! I was hoping you would beat me... Seriously! Well at least our shots will be side by side "snuggling" next to each other like you said. May the stock boy and Rakel find happyness ever after :)
Oh dear. I'm beginning to think I need professional help. I'm starting to think like you in some weird and abnormal fashion. I liked this. I liked the perspective, yes, but mostly I liked the feel of it. Real, a little lonely but not too, and everyday. Ain't nothing wrong with the florescents - that's the way they are - bright, washed out looking. I think you captured them quite well actually.
Now here's an interesting shot; to my mind it cries out for black and white - or at the very least a heightening of the contrast to bring out the closing lines of those shelves - and you slight wide-angle works terribly well to suggest the shelves towering over him too. You might have hoped to catch a better moment fom your unsuspecting model? Some sense of weariness perhaps? He seems just a touch ordinary, just working, just a bit disengaged from any emotion or feeling. But these are all nit-picking points - I like this shot a good deal.