Ooo - try something with that glove for light on white. But either blur out the texture or get it razor sharp. The in-between kind-of-fuzzy kind-of-sharp is making my eyes all googly. And a single spot just isn't grabbing my interest.
Where's the color? Where's the contrast? Oh...you meant to do it this way. :D It's interesting. Not sure that I like it that much. Certainly is artistic and you've used some OOB thinking in your approach. As with all art, some like it and others, well... Kudos for being creative and taking a chance. Good luck in the challenge.