It's a nice shape, but the centered composition isn't grabbing me. Also, it's not especially sharp. Did you take this without a tripod? Or maybe the autofocus went to the flame, and since it was dark, the wide aperture meant nothing else was sharp?
Outside of the challenge, I think this could be a really nice shot. Try retaking it with the candle over on the left, using a tripod, and shutting the aperture down some to get everything sharp. |