My first entry so I would love comments and help please. This is my brother in our Twister sheet and I tried to make his skin look pale by adjusting the yellow colour balance. Otherwise it was contrsat/brightness and USM. Thanks.
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Nice try, but something's missing. That pose just doesn't seem especially corpse-like, esp. with his eyes open. But it's also just not engaging my imagination.
Kind of morbid title and theme. :( As for the image, I like the idea of using the Twister game as a body wrap. The background is too busy and distracting. Almost would have worked better with some lush green grass or plain beige carpet. Of course then you may have had to come up with a different title. :D Good luck in the challenge.
sorry. this feels lifeless -no pun intended with the title. perhaps an action shot of him getting 'twisted' up in the twister would have added more interest IMO.