I think maybe his is a little to light and maybe a tad over sharpened. Some shadows in the grass in the front would have in my opinion really made it stand out. I also would have like to see the crop a little higher and the reflections a little darker to frame the branch as the focal point.
All on scale of 0-2
Lighting: .5
Composition: .5
Focus: 1
Creativity: 1
"Wow Factor": 1
Total: 4
Maybe consider a slightly different angle and less highlight?
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