Really love the shine on the old pavement through the centre of the building, very interesting and a great focal point. Also love the way it frames the city in the background. The left side of the building has some nice highlights where the right seems a little flatter and less defined, I think it would have been better if you did a little dodging and burning on that side to really take the viewers eye through the picture smoothly. Also the water seems a little flat and it would have had more impact if the city in the background also had some darker shadows and lighter highlights to really make it stand out. Over all though I really like it, great composition, hope you don't mind the opinions here.
I like the idea here. I think if the shot was taken just a bit lower so that the bar did not cut throught he middle of the skyline, it would be a more effective shot. 5.