The suit is nice and ties in to the background well and her pose is great. To me her face seems alittle out of focus. Maybe to help with the shadows on her face and hair you could use a reflector to soften the shadows. If you dont have one, I use a piece of large cardboard covered in aluminum foil. Maybe try a shallower depth of field to seperate the model from the background more and you would still get the feel of the ivy in the background. I think the crop works ok, with the rock in the bottom and the sky in the right hand side. Just my thoughts and suggestions...
Message edited by author 2006-11-20 20:48:28. |