When trying to think of a way to capture myself, i had to think of what my true character is. I'm a fairly serious person, but i really like to cut up and have fun. the backwards hat was my way of portraying the fun, youthful side of me, but the darkness showing my serious side, which can get me in trouble sometimes. i hope you like it.
shot w/ my new background set and alienbee umbrella/strobe unit
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Place: 64 out of 193 Avg (all users): 5.9588 Avg (commenters): 6.9048 Avg (participants): 5.8611 Avg (non-participants): 6.0252 Views since voting: 920 Views during voting: 434 Votes: 267 Comments: 23 Favorites: 0
Greetings from the Critique Club: I have been assigned your photo to critique and here are my thoughts:
Personal Reaction: I liked this a lot and it was helpful to see your comments on the photo. With the backwards cap and your bare chest and shoulders, it looks a bit like a swim team photo.
Composition: Good composition; eyes just below center line; face offset; negative space around your head. All these elements seem to work well.
Technicals: Hard to find fault with much. There is a slight halo beside your ear but it’s a minor minor thing. Focus on the eyes is very good.
Conclusions: You were trying for a “whimsical intensity” and you nailed it. Good job!
As always, this is my personal opinion. Feel free to PM me if you’d like further dialog.
coming back for a comment, and now I see this pic is worth more than I voted in the first place. bumping up because of your freckles and the pretty b/w!
Love your freckles. It seems just a touch OOF on your face, and more sharp on the embroidery of the hat. I might play with contrast or levels a smidge, but I like the earnestness of it. 7
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