This would look cool as an album cover or something. Especially if there were two other people posing. For me, personally, I think cropping the very bottom of the frame, where there is a line (drop off, perhaps?) would help focus the attention on the upper part of the frame. Because it is darker than the rest, it seems to draw the eyes down there.
Very nice shot! This could easily be an album cover. I like the tones that were used, and the textures in the photo are marvelous for this look. Great job with the shot and the post processing.
Very cool...but I'd crop out the bottom dark area as well as the top above the numeral 3. Could be interesting to see what the results are when taking the same shot from a different perspective, either lower or higher. :)