Well done. You suggest so much about the room with a minimum number of background details in just the right amount of focus. I'm not sure how I feel about her looking above me. 7
Well above average in this group. If it's a self-portrait, you're probably beating photographers with WAY more experience. Nice lighting and color, but I'd crop off the right side- a face positioned dead center like this usually creates a very static composition. Good job!
8: love this one. The colours work so well, the set up is typical and honest without being boring. Not sure if everyone else will enjoy this as much as I do...just so girly.
The pose is just perfect, and I really like that the little girl is gazing out of the scene to the left of the photographer. L:ighting is effective, and there is a good exposure throughout. Good one!
Need a little different placement of either the lighting or maybe just turn her head to (her left) just a bit so the hair isn't causing the shadow over her left eye and the nose doesn't make such a shadow on her face.