Challenge:Exposed (Classic Editing) Camera:Kodak LS443 Location: My Bedroom Date: Oct 9, 2003 Aperture: F/3.5 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1 second Galleries:Advertisement Date Uploaded: Oct 12, 2003
I really like the slight crumpling of the wrapper. The black background shouldn't really work, but it does - enveloping the whole scene in cosy darkness (ideal for choc-munching). For a real ad shot, I think the client would have demanded everything a micro-dab sharper.
I don't know whether it's the composition or the focus (probably both), but my eye is drawn to the "snickers" writing instead of the exposed, bitten surface.
You did a good job of creating a 'dark' background in this shot. I think a lighter background would create a better contrast with the dark colors of your subject and help bring out the detail more. It looks like it's floating in space with no visible surface.
LOL, aint' that the truth! Good idea, would have used a different background, the black blends in too much for me. The cropping is also just off for me, if you could have included the entire wrapper, though it does help bring you in from one side to the other. Starting with a 7, will be back.
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