The bright colors and ethereal feel real make this photo work for me. the composition is a little busy, but really quite good despite that. Nicely done!
Subject well focused and focal point: 1
Lighting: 1 (eyes drawn to brightest point - white - instead of focal point)
Composition: 2
Background: 1
First impression/ Wow factor: 1
Artistic "override": +1
Total: 7
Good emotive captured