Nice subject, good texture. The red on the bottom detracts, as I'm sure many have already told you. The water on the blue is different but doesn't seem to fit, or add to the composition.
interesting effect with the water :) I would have tried to crop out the red line along the bottom of this photo... I think that a little bit of light diffusion between your flash and the subject could be an improvement also. when the flash is going to 'heat' up your image, you can do a few things to dampen it... one that works for me is to tape a piece of kleenex across the flash.. this dampens the flash and gives you the light you need for a subject shot like this one :) - jmsetzler
I think cropping it a touch tighter at the bottom to eliminate the red/pink stripe would have improved this picture. It's got great focus, and I like the water drops. I also like the contrast between the background colors. karmat
Is this wonderful old box sitting on a very wet tabletop? I hope it wasnt damaged! Otherwise - great to be able to see so much detail. I think my only criticism is the small amount of red at the bottom which needn't have been there and which makes the picture look like it slopes to the left.
Nice pic. I would have cut with the cropping the lower right edge to disapear the redish portion. I like the detail of the water drops and the combination of the blue surface against the background.
A very nice idea and I love the water droplets on the blue. I think a little different cropping could have helped, though. No need for the red line on the bottom to show. And it looks like you've cropped off the right foot, but not the left foot making it look a bit unbalanced.
I'm not too sure if it's just the texture of the object, but it seems a little bit out of focus...still though, very nice presentation. I like the water droplets :)
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