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I think that when putting text within an image you must take into account all of the text that can be read within the photograph. Upon first glance of the words Redirection of Input and Output and then seeing the disassembled mouse there a many layers of meaning within this photograph, but because the viewer is then aloud to read some of the paragraph and can see that it is about something totally different, you then wonder why do you have a parts of mouse on a keyboard. They just don't fit together in this sense. Through a different comopositional set up if you could have somehow had the words in the paragraph out of focus and just the Redirection... in focus this would have been a more compelling image. |