Challenge:Something Old (Classic Editing) Camera:Sony DSC-P5 Location: Home Date: Aug 4, 2002 Aperture: F3.2 ISO: 120 Shutter: 1/60 Date Uploaded: Aug 4, 2002
I'd like to see this lightened up a bit and more contrast added. If you backed up a little or zoomed out to include the top of the cactus in the back I'd like it better. The background is nice, and the potential is there. I like the pots being included...nice touch!
Black streak on wall is distracting ... If that's a shadow where are the other shadows... Would have liked a little more DOF .. I think this would have been better in color ... RLS
Nice cactus garden? Was the point of the sepia to make this look older? The pots look good (kinda new). Not really thrilled with the composition either, its weighted too heavily on the left and bottom. 6 Swash
Your sepia tone is a little too red in my opinion. And this looks like a modern setting anyway. The idea is fine but I think you needed to find a better location to shoot it.