the bokeh is far too dark on this image, the foreground is has nice stronge lighting, but the bokeh (which is the main part of the subject) is underwhelming.. good effort though.. 6
Black and white can work in this situation, but I'm craving the red of the berries and green of the leaves in this one. The lighting seems a touch harsh. I would probably run it through Neat image to smooth out the graininess of the background.