I lik the rhythm and the high key sense of this shot - how the lines all point at the model's face. But I really wish the model's face were much clearer. And try as I might to see some I find no bokeh.
The shapes have a great rhythm and make a nice composition. As far as meeting the challenge goes, I'm completely missing any bokeh at all. Everything is sharp and in focus. Also, I think it would help the pic to have the woman's upper body and face be in the light, so that the contrast between the background is higher.
I guess I am just not catching the bokeh on this one. Everything seems to be in focus pretty well throughout. It is a nice picture. Great lines and the funky tilt works well. I could see this doing gangbusters in another challenge.
I think this image would really have benefited from a stronger use of the rule of thirds. Placing the focal point smack in the center like that is practically never a good idea. Other than that, I think that this image is very very cool. Nice use of contrast and pattern to creat a dynamic shot.
This would be a nice image if the woman were in focus and had good light on her...and maybe, for this challenge, some bokeh thrown in for good measure.
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