An interesting item, but hard for me to associate with a train other than the title. I think in this type of detailed photo, everything should be in tack-sharp focus. the lettering on the bolts are a bit out of focus. The highlights are a bit blown on the high points of the wheel as well.
This looks to be a tough subject to photograph, at least close up, as many pieces are outside the focal plane. The bottom 6 1/2 text and center indentation areas are fine, but much of the rest is not. Also a little over-exposed with the lighting.