I love the face, eyes and hair in this shot but some how the bust area dose not look right. The head and arm in the foreground seems to have magnified them making the bust look small and out of proportion.
It's rather too soft focused and glowy for my tastes. I always find it rather disturbing when perfectly sharp eyes stare out at me from a blurry photo.
My first reaction is that she looks like she's all cramped inside a box. I like the soft glow, though maybe slightly overdone for my tastes. Technically, it's okay for me, but the pose just doesn't look flattering or comfortable.
Nice clevage. Oh, and a pretty face too. :D A little bit strong on the PP, but a nice image overall. In some small way I think it's a shame that you had to go the seductive route with her apparel as she IS a very beautiful lady and needs few distractions to bring across a stunning image. Anyway, good luck in the challenge.
Beautiful model, beautiful lighting...bad pose. The unnatural angle of her head, and the fact that she is both slanting her head and leaning forward at the same time is not flattering. The lightness of her wrist puts too much attention on the fact that her hand is also on a pretty heavy angle, and then cuts off her fingers.
On the plus side I love the nice porcelin skin look, and the brightening to her teeth and eyes look great. A different pose and this would be a knock out!
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