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Very creative idea here. I would love to see it explored further perhaps getting closer to focus on the swirls and less of the dark background. The main thing I'd look to improve is to make the shot more appealling technically. The noise for example, doesn't help at all, IMO. I like it with black and white but I rarely like it in color images and I would say most people are like that also. The compostion is another thing I'd look to improve. Getting closter to the subject should help in regard. |