Meets Challenge = 2
Technical Stuff = 2
Creativity = 2
Overall Impression = 1
Biased Wow Factor = 1
If there had been a ducky onscreen, it would have worked even better.
Took me a minute to get that they were supposed to be on the lake. Initial reaction was, "what do ducks have to do with a laptop?". Perhaps a couple of ducks in the screen image would have helped, but then again it may have been too distracting. Great clarity/focus on the shot and nice comp. 6.
Image is clear, sharp, and clean in composition. Lighting is excellent. I love how you have the duckies moving in formation out from the screen. Love the connection of the ducks to the background screen. On the screen is a background with wonderful trees and a river - exactly where one would expect to see a troop of real ducks swimming. The only thing that would improve the composition is if you had the background picture have a small rubber duck in it so that it the appearance of the ducks coming out of the screen is strengthened. 9