Nice dream, can I join in? Like the soft feeling of this shot. My suggestion - more space above and below the angel, and less space on the left to balance the image off.
This is nice- It is almost but not quite great. She feels very crowded at the top, why is it cropped so close to her head?? and she feels a littlee crowded at the bottom, a little more room would make the cloud like feling better, Also what's with the foot stool. couldn't that be moved out of the way? or is it supposed to be a bed? Maybe if it was white it wouldn't dominate that corner of the photo so much. The rest I love- I like the glint on her ring and bracelt that matches the glint on her shoes. I like the way her hair looks like the feathers on her wings. I like the smokey cloudy background. I wonder if you could have done more with er pose - she looks a little slouchy. 7
there is dream quality to the image...but...hmmmm? the use of lingerie in this image is a bit over done as well as the use of the high heels. the pose also seems a bit out of the norm. The item in the lower right corner detracts from the overall shot as well. the open space in this shot would have looked better on the right as opposed to the left. I know you are going to have a tough go of it this round and I hope I helped some what. good luck 5
Giving my 2 cents,
including the ottoman in the pic made the lower part dark, and the top part (the main focus) lost contrast. Plus tho i like to see a semi nude model, :P i don't find the 'attire' fitting the the model and mood, but if you try to present a 'erotic dream', that's another story....
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