I like the idea, but the angles throw me off just a bit. They lead you into the picture, which is good but then leave you kind of wanting, no real conclusion. The lighting is also just a tad dark for my taste, maybe just a touch more contrast too?
base 1: 1/1; challenge: 3/3; technical: 1/3; aesthetics: 1/3; total: 6
Gray tone nice, but not harsh enough and too dark in spots. Could use some perspective adjustment. Certainly meets the challenge, but no real 'wow' factor.