I like what you were trying to capture here, however, the image is too pixelated and oversharpened. The horizon is also a bit tilted and it's too close to the top edge of the frame.
I think what hurts this shot is the lighting... it seems very harsh. Maybe also taking advantage of the max allowed filesize would also have helped. But everything else is really awesome. I like the composition and the colors and just.. the moment that was captured is really interesting and unique.