I love to make this high key thing with white on white...
The model is my girlfriend. I must say it was kinda hard to use her as a model. But hopefully people will take it easy. :) She really enjoyed the whole thing and she was a trooper :)
The PS is very basic.
Cloned out a necklace and the underware.
Curve
Saturation and channelmixer for the tone
High pass sharpening
and some sharpening for the web.
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Firstly, congratulations on your 14th place finish! :o)
Composition:
I really like your choice of a more square crop to this shot, the models position in the frame is excellent and you have a good use of negative space above her. I would agree with one of your commenters, I am not sure that the ribbons help this shot, but then other commenters have said they like them. I suppose its personal taste, but to me the ribbons say 'party' yet the title tells me something different. Maybe I am not really getting the 'essence' of the person?
Technicals:
The high key effect works extremely well with the models tones and the minimalist look you have going on in your overall image. I think your lighting is excellent and there is some good detail in the models skin.
Overall an excellent image and great finish, well done :o)
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Well done, var eiginlega viss um að þetta væri sami ljósmyndarinn og gerði flottu bjór myndina... Frábært hjá þér, congrats on the high score and a good picture.
Very nice high-key effect. Not sure it needed anything else but the model. There are some visible seams in the background, I think those would be easy to get rid of. Overall, a very nice, powerful image, well done.
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