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10/22/2006 01:46:57 AMPost actions
great imagination..congrats!
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10/21/2006 11:08:58 PMPost actions
Thanks for the many words of encouragement.
10/21/2006 02:03:43 AMPost actions
Hey there from the Critique Club
First of all, congrats on yet another ribbon, as well as your second highest scoring photo to date. I'll also provide a bit of clarification, as least as I understand it, for chispa. As long as the "artwork" is not the subject of the image, it is allowed. In this example, it is not the subject, rather it is a small portion of the overall composition.
Camera Work/Technical: Everything looks nicely focused and very crisp. The tonal range is also very nice, thus making this image particularly appealing.
Lighting: Great, even lighting here with no losses in blown highlights or dark shadows. The reflection on the top right of the magazine cover is mildly distracting, but not nearly enough to detract from the overall scoring of the image.
Composition/Content: Absolutely wonderful for this challenge. You hit the challenge on the nose, meanwhile presenting a issue that faces young girls climbing into maturity. I like it! The placement of the magazine is spot on, as is the placement of your "props." Very nice work.
My Opinion: Personally, I think this one deserved second. While the first two shots in the challenge are nice, my favorite is 5th place, submitted by jaded_youth, followed very closely by this one. Another well-deserved ribbon and top score.
Eric
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10/20/2006 10:02:28 AMPost actions
I think this image is fabulous!!!
BUT why is the magazine allowed?? I thought artwork (including magazine covers) were not allowed.. if they are then why aren't other artistic images allowed (like monitor images)? Just want clarification : )
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10/19/2006 03:17:40 PMPost actions
Great photoshop work and very cleverly done.
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10/19/2006 10:25:05 AMPost actions
I have to say I love the superposition... and the outfit really suits the title... great idea... really love the picture...
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10/18/2006 07:09:02 AMPost actions
I love this shot! Just plain Awesome!
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10/17/2006 05:26:46 PMPost actions
Well done Julie, I like this!
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10/17/2006 04:17:59 PMPost actions
Congratulations on your ribbon with this very cool take on the challenge!! Fantastic work!
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10/17/2006 02:30:18 PMPost actions
Way to show how it is done!
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10/17/2006 10:50:18 AMPost actions
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10/17/2006 01:06:32 AMPost actions
22 challenges entered, 5 of them ribbons.
Good grief you make it look easy.
Congrats on the Julie!
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10/16/2006 11:52:02 PMPost actions
Classic, I won't say that you should have won blue (because I love Lesley's shot), but IMO, better than the red in creativity and craftwork.
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10/16/2006 09:35:02 PMPost actions
Very precise set up! I'm a fan, for sure!
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10/16/2006 07:27:45 PMPost actions
Very creative, great job, congrats.
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10/16/2006 06:06:49 PMPost actions
Well done, congrats - love the shot.
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10/16/2006 04:46:08 PMPost actions
Very good shot. Congrats on the yellow!
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10/16/2006 03:24:59 PMPost actions
This is awesome..reminds me so much of myself. Congrats.
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10/16/2006 11:39:35 AMPost actions
Like my daughter would say, "Cool beans!" Congrats on your ribbon!
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10/16/2006 11:06:48 AMPost actions
Julie, congratulations on the yellow ribbon. Nice idea for the photo. At work, we call this a SWIPE (Steal With Integrity and Pride Everywhere). having the idea is only the first obstacle. Executing is the difficult part, and you executed this very well. Steve
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10/16/2006 10:08:47 AMPost actions
Fun shot - congrats on the yellow!
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10/16/2006 07:37:33 AMPost actions
A great idea - A great photograph! Congratulations!
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10/16/2006 07:28:38 AMPost actions
VERY cool photo. I love this one. congrats on the yellow.
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10/16/2006 07:19:36 AMPost actions
I'm so glad this won a ribbon. What a great, creative photo!! Congratulations!
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10/16/2006 06:35:07 AMPost actions
Congratulations on your ribbon. It is well-deserved!
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10/16/2006 05:10:47 AMPost actions
Congratulations! Very good shot!
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10/16/2006 03:17:43 AMPost actions
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10/16/2006 03:04:38 AMPost actions
Love it
congratulations to your yellow :D
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10/16/2006 02:27:50 AMPost actions
I loved this one! So well done, congratulations!
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10/16/2006 12:58:04 AMPost actions
Congrats. One of my favorites in the challenge.
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10/16/2006 12:32:32 AMPost actions
Julie, this is just great. Wonderful lighting - congratulations on the yellow.
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10/16/2006 12:28:53 AMPost actions
Very clever and well executed. Lighting is great. Congrats on the Yellow
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10/16/2006 12:20:27 AMPost actions
This is an outstanding variation of the DougPaz "Backcover girl". The outfit here is the great hooker that gives this image that great burst of energy. Congratulations on your Yellow!
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10/16/2006 12:12:51 AMPost actions
Outstanding image! Congrats on the ribbon!
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10/16/2006 12:10:19 AMPost actions
Man this is an awesome image. Congrats on the ribbon and the awesome image. Very creative idea. Straight to my favs.
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10/16/2006 12:10:11 AMPost actions
Congrats on the ribbon - the B&W really makes the picture.
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10/16/2006 12:09:50 AMPost actions
even with the same idea, few could compare to your execution. Great creative and a wonderful photo.
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10/16/2006 12:06:31 AMPost actions
julie, congratulations!!!! another fantastic image and a ribbon, well done, this is superb for the challenge
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Comments Made During the Challenge
10/15/2006 10:23:25 PMPost actions
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10/15/2006 10:17:13 PMPost actions
What a really cool idea..So very well done!
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10/15/2006 02:53:06 PMPost actions
Very creative and well composed.
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10/15/2006 02:34:28 PMPost actions
WOW!!! What a GREAT concept! Very well thought out! I love this
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10/14/2006 05:14:14 PMPost actions
I really love this idea. Good job.
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10/14/2006 02:59:45 PMPost actions
Super , fun picture !!! 7
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10/13/2006 07:41:37 PMPost actions
A stroke of genius! What a fun image. Well done - clean, great B&W. Back to bump up to 8.
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10/13/2006 05:11:20 PMPost actions
The technique, while a bit cliché, does work well with the challenge criteria I suppose. I’m sure that this will do well. Good luck!
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10/13/2006 02:32:42 PMPost actions
This is not only a cute photo, but it's message has some complexity. Well done IMHO.
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10/12/2006 10:27:25 PMPost actions
great concept. love everything about this shot. 10
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10/12/2006 09:37:48 PMPost actions
Well executed and so clever! One of my top picks. Hope this does well for you.
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10/12/2006 08:08:20 PMPost actions
Creative use of magazine positioning to capture more information about the subject's personality
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10/12/2006 07:16:35 PMPost actions
Cute, I've seen this done before and I always like it, wanted to try it myself. I like the B&W treatment.
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10/12/2006 12:10:27 PMPost actions
Interesting subject, great idea and execution. Very sharp and I like the B&W.
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10/11/2006 11:07:06 PMPost actions
she's better off being a tomboy. I fell in love with meanwile because she doesn't throw like a girl. Creative yet perfectly on target fulfillment of the challenge. 8
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10/11/2006 10:56:31 PMPost actions
Great original idea. Love the black and white.
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10/11/2006 06:40:11 PMPost actions
Clever way to show the inherent conflict in many teenage girls between their remaining childhood desire to just play, race around, get dirty, use up their energy and their desire to grow up more quickly and join the adult world of glamour and fashion and dating and independence...
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10/11/2006 05:57:55 PMPost actions
I just love this photo. Very creative and the face on the mag fits in so well. Great job! 10 from me.
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10/11/2006 04:48:54 PMPost actions
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10/11/2006 03:05:54 PMPost actions
Cleverly done - good idea, well executed.
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10/11/2006 02:06:42 PMPost actions
oh, this picture reminds me of being a tomboy in my younger days!
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10/11/2006 01:21:42 PMPost actions
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10/11/2006 11:10:04 AMPost actions
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10/11/2006 07:52:30 AMPost actions
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10/11/2006 02:35:19 AMPost actions
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10/10/2006 09:39:26 PMPost actions
great creativity. I love this...8
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10/10/2006 09:34:43 PMPost actions
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10/10/2006 07:28:30 PMPost actions
Very inventive idea! I like the creativity and the execution. Nicely done.
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10/10/2006 07:24:54 PMPost actions
WOW! What a great shot. I love it. I looked, went on to the next photo, and then came back again and again. Nice Job.
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10/10/2006 05:18:23 PMPost actions
nice juxtaposition. and nice b&w conversion. 8
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10/09/2006 03:40:36 PMPost actions
That's just excellent...
edit: Just came back for a second look - and your picture is still great. The idea might not be very original, but you've still created something special - probably due to the contradiction between the "real girl" and the "glam girl"... I'll raise my rating by one...
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10/09/2006 03:38:27 PMPost actions
Very creative. This is one that doesn't even need a title.
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10/09/2006 03:28:52 PMPost actions
Great idea and good job presenting it. 7
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10/09/2006 02:41:59 PMPost actions
lol, this is one of my favs so far, wish there was a little bit more interest in the background, but it really is a great idea. and you matched the magazine sooo well. nice job
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10/09/2006 02:07:41 PMPost actions
That is fantastic, I like the way the picture and the girl lined up and her hair just seemed to flow right onto the page. I also like the B&W effect which bring the tones together. Top ten if not a ribbon!
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10/09/2006 01:57:47 PMPost actions
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10/09/2006 01:55:36 PMPost actions
An intriguing black and white photo
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10/09/2006 01:35:17 PMPost actions
Very well done! This is so creative, and has perfect execution. Really great job.
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10/09/2006 12:59:10 PMPost actions
Clever. Cool and appealing workaround to the challenge. Has a "found" look to it even if it isn't and if it is, priceless.
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10/09/2006 12:03:24 PMPost actions
Great idea and very well executed! Well done!
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10/09/2006 11:20:29 AMPost actions
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10/09/2006 10:39:12 AMPost actions
Very nice composition holding the magazine Just Right so that it acts as her face while still hiding her beneath. Very creative and a 7.
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10/09/2006 10:26:07 AMPost actions
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10/09/2006 10:10:52 AMPost actions
excellent creative, great execution!
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10/09/2006 08:31:47 AMPost actions
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10/09/2006 03:12:53 AMPost actions
I'd say this is a scalvert but too little damage was done to the kids. :P Whoever this is great shot. 10!
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10/09/2006 01:54:56 AMPost actions
that's a great idea! I can't believe no one else thought of something like this...great as a b and w, and a great title
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10/09/2006 01:08:53 AMPost actions
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10/09/2006 01:01:48 AMPost actions
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10/09/2006 12:57:15 AMPost actions
the irony of this shot is great! has a great story involved here
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10/09/2006 12:25:30 AMPost actions
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