I really like the shadow the bears cast on the wall. It makes it into interesting shot. The only distracting element is that diagonal line runnig from top centre dowards left. My other suggestion would be to make this image either b&w since there is very little colour or using some prop to cast a bit of colour onto the bears (maybe a lamp with coloured celphane over it). But maybe you dream in b&w - which is OK with me :-))
I like the concept but the shadows and light reflections are a bit too distracting to me. Maybe if you had come at a different angle or lighted them a little differently?
Nice black and white. Maybe crop off that little white part in the lower right, and then a little off the top to make things "even" again. I really like the reflection on the wall. Maybe could be a little lighter.