Good sharpness. Clock has almost midnight - funny. It is a bit too busy though. Also, technicolour means almost like a rainbow colours. Yours seem more pastel like. All I suggest is - simplify.
Disjointed, must like dreams but I think a soft focus would have worked much better on this, also if you could have made the items seem suspended, more surreal.
It's difficult to get a dreamy effect from a still life but you've managed something interesting here. These objects have that time-standing-still air about them and the clock pointing to "almost midnight" helps with a strong nighttime feel.
Very creative. They say you only dream in black & white, but once in awhile you can have dreams with color in them. Nice composition. Nice choices for subjects. Good job. 7.
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