this is a wonderful subject. I like the color contrast between the warm rust and bricks and the cool grass. you might want to try to tone down the sky. if you made the whole image a little darker, it might enhance the abandoned feeling of the building and keep the sky from bleeding like that. nice shot.
Something old. Use your photographic technique to emphasize the age of your subject. Composition - good. I'd like to see it without the metal roof in foreground Technical Aspects - quite good Meets Challenge - probably. Might look unkempt, not old. Visual Impact / Originality - good
very nice example of 'rustic' :) I think the top portion of this image is slightly over exposed.. .maybe a neutral density or polarizing filter would remedy this one. Good shot :) - jmsetzler
Good job of conveying the subject. I like the contrasting colors of bright greens and brown/red rust. The amount of new growth over and around the structure and the metal help define your subject. Great framing too.
Very nice composition of the picture. The corrugated metal in the front is a real eye-catcher and the vanishing of the colours towards the back are great! Congratulations
What is derelict? The building? The wall? The corrugated iron sheet? Nice focus, colour and contrast but the picture lacks direction. Where are we supposed to be looking?
The low saturation in the rooftop's colors and the white space above takes away from what could have been a stronger composition. I think a bit of saturation would have definitely helped.
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