There is a hot spot across the iron that is distracting. Maybe try using a different light source other than the flash. Or try putting some thin white cloth over the flash to soften it a little. I like how the background is dark. Could be a nice abstract if you work with it a little more.
:) that's very cool. i was actually laughing out loud when i saw this just now. I would like to see it a couple points lighter maybe? Composition is good, and i even like how the y is "peeling" off the iron. good interpretation of the category - nice work.