Very cute and I like the B&W here. A sweet flirty composition. One suggestion would be to even up the horizon to make the building lines (and other lines) in the pic parallel with the crop. Good eye to catch a fun shot. 7
I think this might have been greatly improved by rotating to level the frame with the line that appears at bottom. Other than that, this a lovely candid with a warm story. Very nice.
A little dark. Needs better whites. The highlights ended up kind of becoming a midtone, which left the image somewhat muddy. Nice subject, though. I am really eating up these street shots.
What hurts this is the tilt. If you could straight out the horizon, it would have much more impact. Interesting that it's all mid tones and shadow. Not much highlighting.
I see what you were trying to do here, and with patience you will undoubtedly capture it. Move around, as to not get the one umbrella growing out of her head. Also, the bar going horizontal cuts through both their heads, so perhaps a different POV.
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