I couldn't get access to do my original shot, so here is my backup shot.
Thanks to EmpWolf from work for the brainstorming ideas! And thanks to all of those that actually comment on my photos in the contests, they help me a lot!
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First, I understand the concept and it's good. The lighting is effective. The composition is off. It looks too static. It might have been more appealing/exciting if the vault had been placed in a different position within the frame.
Like the idea, but I don't like the coposition. Maybe come from a different angle and space out the two subjects instead of placing one right on top of the other.