Wow its different thinking. Good capture. These pictures would look better in a wide angle lens. The perspective would give a different feel and a new dimension.
The exposure is good. The picture doesn't generate a lot of intrest and might end up with a low score because of that and the lack of wetness(making it seem to be dnmc).
Here are some things to think about. How could it be made more interesting? Could the composition have been taken more at a diagonal, Cropped closer, or would an added element that was more colorful have changed it?
Has suggestions of a slightly careless approach - the number of weeds visible, that little section of sky, the lack of a sense of conclusion to the linear compositional elements. Keeping a shot whose primary impact is textural in colour like this doesn't work I think - this would be so much more impactful in black and white, and even more so had it been shot at a less harsh time of light.
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