Pros:
DOF - less would be even better, but this is good.
Idea/creativity - are these candies or something?
placement of the point of interest
Cons:
Boring subject matter (I can get over that though) - what are they anyway?
Harsh lighting (the green object has a strong glare) - use a warmer light.
Nice macro shot. Are these really sprinkles? They could be tomatoes (one that didn't ripen) or oranges or any one several other things. The shot is effective, and I'm not even sure why.